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The sound of scraping metal fills our ears,
Screeching as the car skids to a stop,
The front half wrapped around a tree,
Shit,
I think we may have crashed.

I watch you climb out of the wreck,
Grab hold of one of your friends,
And walk away,
Leaving me there to struggle,
Unable to free myself.

The sound of dishes breaking echoes,
Our loud shouts fill the air,
Insults are traded like money,
And fuck,
I think this relationship is over.

I stare as you storm out the door,
Listening as it slams behind you,
You go to stay at a friend’s house,
Again,
Leaving me stuck in this mess.
©2009 ~Riabbit---X
:iconriabbit---x:

Author's Comments

cause my friend was recently in a car crash with his girlfriend and she got out of it with a couple of scratches and then dumped him not to long after...

he was pretty bummed seeing as she was his first girlfriend since 'the accident' and he asked for a poem depicting the similarities between the events...

so here it is

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Very well done and truly heart-wrenching D|

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